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But at the same time I feel quite satisfied with the result. My goal was to write a non-regular lemonfic, and at least I hope that the whole DA isn't full of those stories like mine already... ^^'
There's few things that annoys me in lemonfics, which I tried to avoid:
1) empty blanks... e.g. '______! _____!'
2) repeating the same things that everyone has done with
their stories earlier...with the same plot 'kiss kiss-bang bang- love ya- love ya too'
3) making reader as passive as possible, she/he barely says/does anything.
But now I'd love to get feedback from you, so feel free to leave a comment, add this to faves or do whatever u want to. Thanks for reading~!
Listening: We Cry by The Script
(EDIT 15.06. -14: Thanks for the crazy amount of faves and love!)
Did you really read that? Hope I didn't traumatize you...
Anyway, this is my first lemon ever... Eh. I feel a bit embarrassed.
But at the same time I feel quite satisfied with the result. My goal was to write a non-regular lemonfic, and at least I hope that the whole DA isn't full of those stories like mine already... ^^'
There's few things that annoys me in lemonfics, which I tried to avoid:
1) empty blanks... e.g. '______! _____!'
2) repeating the same things that everyone has done with
their stories earlier...with the same plot 'kiss kiss-bang bang- love ya- love ya too'
3) making reader as passive as possible, she/he barely says/does anything.
But now I'd love to get feedback from you, so feel free to leave a comment, add this to faves or do whatever u want to. Thanks for reading~!
Characters: Himaruya Hidekaz
Story: Me
Until next time, peace out!
Story: Me
Until next time, peace out!
Listening: We Cry by The Script
(EDIT 15.06. -14: Thanks for the crazy amount of faves and love!)
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I may or may not have accidentally moaned at about 0015...